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My friend
Your outside of steel.
Just to defend
And hide what you feel.
To stay the same
You never seem to change.
Metal hiding your misplaced shame
Perhaps it might be good to exchange
That unchanging surface
To something transparent.
Something small
For those to look in
To see the true you.
Because it may not be apparent
The end will not come
If you show a little steam.
Your outside of steel.
Just to defend
And hide what you feel.
To stay the same
You never seem to change.
Metal hiding your misplaced shame
Perhaps it might be good to exchange
That unchanging surface
To something transparent.
Something small
For those to look in
To see the true you.
Because it may not be apparent
The end will not come
If you show a little steam.
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I was thinking about something and wrote this. Some of it doesn't flow well but I liked it. Random thoughts equaling in bizarre poetry!! >___>'''' 
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I really like this, its so simple yet expresses something much deeper. May I ask what you were thinking of that inspired this?